Art Style isn't terrible, but you could've honestly made a flashback scene with his story and this could've been gold. It's no fun watching a guy tell a story without visuals, especially when you have the means to do it.
Art Style isn't terrible, but you could've honestly made a flashback scene with his story and this could've been gold. It's no fun watching a guy tell a story without visuals, especially when you have the means to do it.
There's almost no animation here, and the I can barely hear the voices. Learn some animation principles and try it again, but don't give up.
Thank you for your criticism. The video is pretty much a trailer for what's the come, that's why it's only 40 seconds. Later episodes will be longer and have more animation.
Great as always. Love the twist at the end. And holy shit that got really dark.
I would recommend you learn flash. This is a nice first step into animation. I would also invest in a drawing tablet, which can be picked up at a local Micheal's for like $50.
thx for the advice,but i didn't put that much work into things like these cause their jokes.
Animation was ok but will improve with time. Just gotta work on your art, and maybe tink around a bit with some of the audio. Noticed it was playing from one speaker sometimes it didn't seem right.
Overall, decent animation!
thanks man! my newer animations will be better since I started using adobe flash after this video, and thanks for the compliment !
You're definitely on you're way to becoming a good animator! Do everything you can to make it bouncy and also practice drawing everyday!
Glad to see even though with your busy schedule, you still upload to Newgrounds too! Thanks for being an inspiration to me!
I should really be there for more streams. I'll have to up my donation amount again!
Thanks for the support! I'll announce everywhere when I start on the Prowlies episode.
I honestly couldn't stop laughing. Superb.
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